PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Five

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Five

Niou coaxes Yagyuu into more intimacy; or perhaps it's the other way around. Drama with Porn, I-3

He reached out and, delicately, removed Yagyuu's glasses. A signal, a symbol, a talisman, but more than anything else an intense desire to see Yagyuu Hiroshi's eyes.

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[naanima.livejournal.com]

meep.

I'm going to sound like I'm repeating myself. But I don't care! I love, I love, I love this! You made the Power3 OFFICIAL! *screams* The happiness I feel is not measurable by any human means. Wahhhh. I lvoe how Yagyuu is relaxing more and more, even when it isn't jsut him and Niou. See his sense of humour, fear his sense of humour *giggles*

I love the two of them, but I have admit I'm equaly enjoying the team dynamic that is abound in this piece. Marui's persinality is so fecking bright in this, Yukimura is amazing, Sanada's presence come through, and Yanagi is in the background at all times. I SQUEEEE!

And finally, Niou's obsession with fire and danger, a metaphorical pyromaniac indeed. Oh, and Yagyuu letting go of his restraints *sighs happily* And the Niou's reaction to that. The second sign of love. Niou you are so getting over your head.

LOVE! MORE!

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

Let the corruption proceed apace.



"Are you saying," Yagyuu asked, after a long, contemplative pause, "that you're a metaphorical pyromaniac?" He looked amused.

And that is the most perfect description of Niou-mun EVER! *worships you*

"You worry too much," Masaharu grinned. "I won't ever lose myself in you, Yagyuu."

*cocks eyebrow* Oh, really?

The troika is being ADORABLE!!! And they are so babying Kirihara there...must not say it...must not say it...Ahhh! Power to the People!!! @____@ Yagyuu's kiss is so *tremble*, what great decriptions, always feel very satisfied with those *nodsphilosphically* Niou's interpretation amuses me soundly, I tend to rail like that in my PolSci class. ^_^

Whoa...I commented right-a-way. You'd think I was stalking this fic...ok, maybe I am. XDDD

damn...

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

{slack jawed and slightly breathless} well... hot damn! I wasn't expecting an ending like *that*!

[shakes head to clear it] welll... [clears throat] yes, then... errr... okay [blinks]

first off--ha! I love the image of the four boys discussing whether or not the triad's in 'that' kind of relationship, and how it would have to be all three, 'cause two alone simply don't hold it together (and aint that the truth)

And Kirihara's so cute! Think he has a crush on Yukimura? now *why* would I even *suggest* a thing like that...? Hmm... Oh, but the description of Sanada...and Yuki... and Kiri... Hmmm... now *that's* an interesting threesome idea... hmmm... what do you think, Bunny? dammit, I need to get a printer/scanner so you all could *see* the Rikkai puzzle... Kiri bent over with Yuki and Sanada behind him really *is* a nice image...

I truly love how all the characters are interacting, though (especially Bunta, who I just simply adore right now ^.^ It's a redhead thing, I swear), but, without a doubt... the ending scene definitely knocked me for a loop.

While generally, you know me, I like my scenes smutty and descriptive, this was just... well, a mind fuck, really. {grins} very well done, too. And I just can hardly wait for the sixth installment, however, with my meds beginning to wear off, I think it's about time for a nap for me... so...

[readx0r.livejournal.com]

His goal was to get Yagyuu to cut off a teacher at the knees. He felt it would be a healthy step forward in his partner's personal development.

And it would be fun as hell to watch.

*IS JUST DEAD*

Y'know, I have not seen one episode of the anime, and I have read only one book of the manga, and already I have fallen COMPLETELY IN LOVE WITH NIOU. Not, you understand, that I think this will be some kind of huge problem. ^__________^ <333333333

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

His goal was to get Yagyuu to cut off a teacher at the knees. He felt it would be a healthy step forward in his partner's personal development.

And it would be fun as hell to watch.

The question that follows, of course, is whether he's going to succeed, and if we get to see. [grin]

"Would you really?" Yagyuu wondered, softly. His gaze was somehow both piercing and distant, and Masaharu heard questions behind the question. Would you really want to and Could you really handle it, among others.

"Oh, yes," he answered all of them, mouth curling.

[purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs]

Yagyuu's intuition was a match for anyone else's analysis, Masaharu reflected.

Don't let Yanagi catch you saying that. [bouncebounce]

Masaharu, darling, Yagyuu *is* right. You are a an adrenaline junky.