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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-06-18 11:00 pm

PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Five

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Five

Niou coaxes Yagyuu into more intimacy; or perhaps it's the other way around. Drama with Porn, I-3

He reached out and, delicately, removed Yagyuu's glasses. A signal, a symbol, a talisman, but more than anything else an intense desire to see Yagyuu Hiroshi's eyes.

[identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
meep.

I'm going to sound like I'm repeating myself. But I don't care! I love, I love, I love this! You made the Power3 OFFICIAL! *screams* The happiness I feel is not measurable by any human means. Wahhhh. I lvoe how Yagyuu is relaxing more and more, even when it isn't jsut him and Niou. See his sense of humour, fear his sense of humour *giggles*

I love the two of them, but I have admit I'm equaly enjoying the team dynamic that is abound in this piece. Marui's persinality is so fecking bright in this, Yukimura is amazing, Sanada's presence come through, and Yanagi is in the background at all times. I SQUEEEE!

And finally, Niou's obsession with fire and danger, a metaphorical pyromaniac indeed. Oh, and Yagyuu letting go of his restraints *sighs happily* And the Niou's reaction to that. The second sign of love. Niou you are so getting over your head.

LOVE! MORE!

[identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com 2004-06-19 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes, and that was the other thing I forgot. I so felt the Sanada/Kirihara vibes, which you know should ahve disturbed me, except you know, it really does make sense. Mind you, in my deluded mind, I picture the Power3 being more open about their relationship than most people. As long as they realise that the three of them are meant to be ^__^

(thus, validating Inui/Yanagi, or Yanagi/Inui for me ^_^;;;)

And YES! The switching begins ^__^V