Masaharu could barely hide his glee as he observed the subtle relaxation in his partner, shoulders looser, breath deeper, head higher. The bright, furious sense of Yagyuu's presence pooled around him, charged the space between them, snapped across the net to lick at their victims. Masaharu shivered, delighting in it.

Oh, oh, oh, I DO love how you write Rikkai. All of them. ♥

I think I like this better than other fics of yours that I've read; I'm not quite sure just why, but... I don't know, something about what you're doing with characterization and how you're writing seems a lot more "real." Dialogue is occasionally stilted, but I can forgive that (...Trying to capture the different levels of politeness in English is really hard, isn't it? x__X)

yes. love this. going to read the rest now.