PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Two

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Two

Niou and Yagyuu become a doubles pair, and the game continues. Drama, I-3

Masaharu opened his mouth to ask a pointed question about why it was Yukimura making all these decisions and announcing them, and not the captain standing, silent and uncomfortable, behind the Trinity. He closed it again, with a smooth look, at Sanada's burning glare.

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[soloproject.livejournal.com]

OMG, I'm so sorry. Andrea's comments always make me "ooh"! Just as much as this fic does.

First off, I would like to say as Muse Police I am so proud that they are behaving properly.

Second, Yukimura = POWER TO THE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!! The characterization of our little girl is so wonderful. The natural leadership and the polite evil so befits him it's so easy to believe why he would be buchou and not Sandork.

Niou is so cute, very different from the way he is normally portrayed in but still so appropriate. He is so being tortured by Yagyuu there and the "Sensei" probably knows it too.

Enjoyinh this IMMENSELY!! Now off to the third!

[branchandroot]

*nods* Yep, the Muse Police definitely have a commendation coming. ^_-

*thoughtful* I'm really not sure where it came from, but I have a very strong feeling that Niou doesn't consider himself evil. Possibly just his general lack of repentance, even when he's being 'Yagyuu'. Now, Yagyuu, I think, knows the danger inside himself. It makes for interesting dynamics.

*hearts*