PoT: Mirror Writing: Burning

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Burning

In the winter of Ohtori's third year of junior high and Shishido's first year of high school. Shishido reflects on his partner, and their bond as a doubles pair. Drama With Romance, I-3

The first time Ryou found himself admiring his partner's body, he chalked it up to hormones and went on from there.

Comments

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

*goes into hysterics*

Ohtori! Shishido! Ohtori! Shishido! *dances* ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[branchandroot]

*bounces* Lovelovelove them, oh, yes. ^___^

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

[wanders in]

[finally--finally!--places the title of this sub-arc]

[grins]

[wanders away to fall asleep on Jori's couch]

Bob: All the squealing and bouncing when she found a double fic post took it out of her. Yep.

[branchandroot]

Real hugs in *checks watch* an hour and a half! Yes!

^_^; Eh, we all had that damn poem inflicted on us at some point.

[luceage.livejournal.com]

The love, man, the love. Your characterization is just spot-on, and I just love the mix of introspective thinking and sharply-written dialogue. Whee! *is happy* :))

[branchandroot]

*happy bouncing* Thank you! These two are a lot of fun to do introspection with.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

{happy (if sleepy) smiling glow}

saaa... if Kaidoh and Inui are Ohtori and Shishido (2nd year/3rd year doubles pairing) does that make GP the Yuushi & Gakuto pair? {snickers at image of someone walking into a randy setting of GP romping....} Not *as* entertaining as Yuushi replying "come back in 15 minutes"--which I can *so* definitely see... {grinning}

Saa, tis good, tis very good... nice stuff to go to sleep with... ^___________^ mmmmmm... I think I feel a Gakuto & Oshitari fic coming from somewhere... {pets a hopeful looking fic-bunny}

[branchandroot]

Well, considering that Mukahi already seems pissed at Eiji for being too much like him...

*bad thoughts*

^____^

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

Mmm... upon second, third, and forth thoughts---

Choutaroh and Ryou make a better GP than Yuushi and Gakuto {nodsnods} much better.... ^_____^

[sharona1x2.livejournal.com]

Okay, this is going to sound strange, but I really like the way you don't write the relationship between them too romantically. What I mean is that you write it very subtly, and without heavy romantic overtones. It all adds to the realistic feeling I'm getting, as if you really are examining how two people fall in love, slowly.

I'm not sure which I like better, the way you get into Shishido's head, or Ohtori's. You write them both very well. I get the feeling that Ohtori may be starting to wonder the same things that Shishido is. ^___^

Again, I'm thrilled to have all of this arc to read at once. Thank you for posting it this way.