epic 13 and 14

[branchandroot]

It's done! It's done!

Well, minus final revisions, anyway.

Chapter thirteen, short, Roy-torture, because he's so messed up.

http://www.alltrees.org/hybrid/writing/FMA/ever.ch13.html

Chapter fourteen, lemon (at last, right?)

http://www.alltrees.org/hybrid/writing/FMA/ever.ch14.html


And kind of dangling end, because the next part is another story. Looking alarmingly domestic, too.

Comments

Awww... very sweet.

[arete.livejournal.com]

*sparkle at you* Me like! And I so picture Sakki's version of Ed here. And how he physically interacts with Roy in those pics, too. Very very sweet. *more sparkles*

[annotated_em]

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! [dies of happiness] [fangirls from beyond the grave] SQUEE!

[driftingfocus.livejournal.com]

Wonderful and beautiful. I really like the way this fic turned out. It had a lot of promise and I'm glad that it held up to it.

By the way, do you use AIM at all?

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[branchandroot]

Glad you liked!

Erm, no... what is it?

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[driftingfocus.livejournal.com]

AIM, you know, AOL Instant Messenger? Like Yahoo Messenger or IRC?

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[branchandroot]

Ah! No, actually, I've stayed away from those ever since some bad experiences in the very early days of chat and IRC. They moderately terrify me. I'm really very timid, all appearances to the contrary aside. And those... tend to go too fast; when I can't see the other person I like to think about my responses. (Unless, of course, I've gone completely postal, in which case I don't think at all and it's a bad thing.)

[marmalade-girl.livejournal.com]

*_* Lovely. I'm terribly jealous, though. May I print up a copy and write "Angela" across all those "Roy"s?

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[branchandroot]

*snerk* Oh, sure you can. Isn't that what we're all doing in our heads, anyway, one way or another, with stories like this?