epic 4

[branchandroot]

And here's chapter four. It went a lot faster than I expected, actually.

Slight angst, major snarkiness, small spoiler ep 7

http://www.alltrees.org/hybrid/writing/FMA/ever.ch4.html

Comments

Re: And once again, you surprise me...

[branchandroot]

Oh, Ed is a brilliant natural manipulator; personally I figure that's half the reason Roy gets his goat so bad. Roy sees what he does and does it better.

So far...

Heh. Marsh is a complete throw away character, but I needed someone who would piss Ed off in a small way. And he deserves it.