FMA epic start

[branchandroot]

Ok, here's the first chapter of the epic that bit me. Linked off site because I'm sick of messing around with code that's scrozzled on one end or the other.

Antagonism is the main warning for this chapter.

http://www.alltrees.org/hybrid/writing/FMA/ever.ch1.html

Back to ch. 2.

Comments

[moumusu.livejournal.com]

...I wonder if Al isn't just going to try to kill Roy, but finally try to get his license? Or is he still vulnerable to mean scientists wanting to take him apart? (Might make better sense if he sticks around and keeps Winry company, anyway...)

I likes it. Write us more.

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[branchandroot]

Bwahaha! Just wait for chapter two. *evil smirk*