PoT: Mirror Writing: Wrapped Around My Finger

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Wrapped Around My Finger

Mizuki seduces Yuuta, and possibly vice versa. Drama With Romance, I-3

It wasn't that Yuuta didn't know what kind of person Mizuki Hajime was. He knew perfectly well.

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[naanima.livejournal.com]

OMG!

Let's just state right now that I will continue to EGG you on! Yes, I will.

But this was, this was so twisty, yet so straightforward. Urk, I'm trying to put my thoughts into words, and all I can think about is the ending. Not the Mizuki putting his foot in it (though quite amusing, but Fuji baiting is never healthy), it is the realisation that Yuuta's life is good, and not fully controlled by the two because the two obsessive/possessive freaks keep each other in check.

It is the realisation that Yuuta, teh Fuji that he is, and the wonderful boy that he is, is manipulating everything in his favour. Not saying that he's involved with Mizuki only for the counterbalance to Fuji, but rather he's manipulating everyone WITHOUT lying to his own feelings.

And that, that my friend is admirable.

And Mizuki, oh gods Mizuki, the snake truly cares for Yuuta. No matter how that caring (dare I say love?) comes with ten pages of disclaimer and footnotes. Ulterior motives abound, yes, yet EVERYONE is truhtful to themselves without betraying each other. I LOVE!

I can't wait to see what you will be coming up with next.

And Yuuta writing to Fuji about Mizuki and him was just PRICELESS, yet so in character. I SQUEE!

[branchandroot]

*basks in the squee* Thank you, darling!

but Fuji baiting is never healthy

No, it isn't, but Mizuki does have a reason for tempting fate. He's courting that part of Syuusuke that most sane people try to avoid. When he specified "if he survives", he wasn't entirely kidding. And I think he'll get what he wants. Not entirely sure I'll be able to write it, but I think he'll get it.

No question that he'll come back to Yuuta, though, because I do think Mizuki loves him, deep in his reptilian heart. *dotes on them*

[naanima.livejournal.com]

*pile on the squee*

I'm really quite interested about Mizuki's need to bait Fuji. The want to know is very strong. Perhaps even if you don't write the fic, you might be able to write a short rant on the whys of Mizuki's fascination with Fuji. Yes, that would be very helpful.

Defintely. I knew he was dead serious. Mizuki knows the danger of Fuji, but pride, need, or whatever that's driving Mizuki to toy with danger, he knows he's likely to get hurt, but ohhhhh, whatever he want must be worth it.

*dotes on them with you*

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm right behind you on this!

{still laughing her ass off at Yuuta's comment to Syusuke about Mizuki *not* eating him on the way home...} No, seriously... I think I scared the neighbors I laughed so damn hard...

This was great; and there's another piece, ne? Between Syusuke and Mizuki? {toddles off to read}

[branchandroot]

*snickers* Yuuta's still a bit put out with me that I didn't stop him from saying that. But Mizuki agrees with me that he's cute when he blushes, so he was outvoted.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

And I'm sure Syusuke was too shocked/pissed to put in his vote. ^.^ But just the imaged look on his face when first Yuuta and the Mizuki answered the phone...

"Oh... I see..."


{still giggling remembering it}