Konomi’s (dis)continuity
Jan. 30th, 2008 02:24 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Hang on. Wait just one minute.
So, the bit about Sanada telling Yukimura about the Kantou results.
One, hasn’t Yukimura just finished having surgery? Where is he getting all that liveliness from?
Two, what is this "I told you not to talk to me about tennis"? Haven't they been talking, quite amicably, about tennis just a few hours ago, when Sanada reports in just before his match and Yukimura says yes, he's going to go through with the surgery? How can Yukimura's angst and throwing Sanada out of his room possibly fit in with the other scenes Konomi has already written within that timeframe? The scene of the doctor talking about how bad the illness is and how Yukimura is probably already beyond playing tennis does not look like it happens immediately post-op!
Konomi, can't you write a consistent storyline to save your soul? *disgusted* It's true, you know. The whole Nationals arc is a freaking AU.