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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-04-29 07:13 pm
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PoT: Mirror Writing: Color of the Sea

Fic post from my archive.

Color of the Sea

Atobe and Fuji have a chat about possessiveness. Drama, I-3

"If you objected I would expect it to be because you thought I was a threat," Atobe said, elliptically. "And if you thought I was a threat, I would expect you to carve my heart out and never lose that smile while you did it."

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[identity profile] shizukanahikari.livejournal.com 2004-05-02 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
ehehehe. I loved the last part. Ehehehee. Thought Atobe was rather OOC in the whole thing though.. but Fuji was PERFECT. ^_^
elder Tachibana and Fuji, eh? Interesting...
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[personal profile] branchandroot 2004-05-02 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
^_^ Thank you.

Atobe certainly isn't where he started out; by this time in the arc, he shouldn't be. Is he jarring in context with the rest of the Mirror Writing stories? *nibbles nail* There's certainly room between "Pace" and this for another story; did you feel it needed more build-up before showing Atobe's reactions from the outside like this?
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