PoT: Mirror Writing: Color of the Sea

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Color of the Sea

Atobe and Fuji have a chat about possessiveness. Drama, I-3

"If you objected I would expect it to be because you thought I was a threat," Atobe said, elliptically. "And if you thought I was a threat, I would expect you to carve my heart out and never lose that smile while you did it."

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[pastles.livejournal.com]

oh the last bit killed me XDDD

lovely... lovely

[branchandroot]

*giggles* I think Tezuka might just regret it if he's ever in the room with both of these two at the same time. ^______^

[pastles.livejournal.com]

yes, i wonder how Tezuka would react being in the same room as Fuji and Atobe and both of them baiting him/each other at the same time

*dangles bunny*

[branchandroot]

*scratches bunny behind ears* I wonder where I could set it? Maybe Atobe is feeling evil enough to invade Seigaku's afternoon practice...

*bunny snuggles in looking smug*

[hikariblue.livejournal.com]

*chuckle*
I do love Fuji. And you've managed to capture all the reasons why.

[branchandroot]

*smirk* He's so much fun, especially when he finds such a delightful toy...

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Fuji scares me.

But in a good way.

[adds him to the list of People Not To Piss Off.

[branchandroot]

*nodnodnod* Not a boy you want to cross.

[arashi-neko.livejournal.com]

Fuji is definitely scary, not someone anyone would want after them, ever.

[veatariel.livejournal.com]

Kya!!! Tachibana x Fuji! <333

Well, I wouldn't want to be in Atobe's position if Fuji wants to get back at him. Fuji is really scary when he's mad. ^_~

Oh, behold the soul-sucking power of PoT. ^__^

[branchandroot]

You can say that again. Any show that can wrest my mind away from FMA is a force to be reckoned with.

I think I'm going to have to do the Tachibana/Fuji backstory. They're just so sweet together. *has a hanyaaan moment*

[exwaiz.livejournal.com]

*rotfl* Fuji amuses me to no end. And your Atobe is simply lovely. I'm still fangirling over this line:

He fell silent, and Syuusuke decided to try drawing out the still unsaid things hinted at by a faint smile that looked remarkably like one of Tezuka's.

Excellent. I love it.

[branchandroot]

Thank you! These two strike such pretty sparks off each other... I think I'm probably going to wind up writing more of them interacting.

[love]

*boggles* That episode just aired and you've already got an icon for it.

[exwaiz.livejournal.com]

I had a lot of screencaps for that episode and episode 130. ^^; And I thought the "never give up" line was sweet. So... XD

[dr3ams.livejournal.com]

I love the last part!

Hope that they would end up somewhere together with Tezuka caught in the between. Hehe. Well, hopefully all of the 2 teams will be there too!

Chaos, there will be.

[branchandroot]

*huge grin* It was just begging to be said; I couldn't resist. Chaos coming up, as soon as I figure out where to set it!

[naanima.livejournal.com]

I LOVE this!

Fuji and Atobe, the EVIL of all EVIL! I LOVE!!

And Tachbana and Fuji! I have been waiting for this couple to pop up since the while anipuri Fuji/Tachibana moments. You make me so happy *huggles*

I especially adore the bits and pieces you reveal about Fuji and Tezuka.Friends, yes, something more, maybe but never realised, and just so perfect! I LOVE!

[branchandroot]

*snuggles* It's a good thing to make my friends happy. ^_^

Those hospital moments are just so perfect, something has to be done with them. More TachiFuji, complete with almost-but-not-quite TezuFuji is in the pipe!

[shizukanahikari.livejournal.com]

ehehehe. I loved the last part. Ehehehee. Thought Atobe was rather OOC in the whole thing though.. but Fuji was PERFECT. ^_^
elder Tachibana and Fuji, eh? Interesting...

[branchandroot]

^_^ Thank you.

Atobe certainly isn't where he started out; by this time in the arc, he shouldn't be. Is he jarring in context with the rest of the Mirror Writing stories? *nibbles nail* There's certainly room between "Pace" and this for another story; did you feel it needed more build-up before showing Atobe's reactions from the outside like this?

[simply-kim.livejournal.com]

Lovely, lovely, lovely fic! I loved this part:

"He is a hand to catch my balance on," Atobe said at last, "and silence that hears. He is a drive that matches mine and a mind that can argue against me."

Oh man... such dreamy words... but they do describe Tezuka well, don't thay? ^^ Hope to read more of your TezuAto fics! ^^

[branchandroot]

*grins* All that epic poetry, you know. I figure Atobe must have a poetic turn of phrase tucked away when he wants to use it.

Definitely more on the way!

[simply-kim.livejournal.com]

^^ I do hope your next fics would have such stuff like this... I find these types of poetic dialogue very appealing. ^^ Well, I'll be waiting then! ^^ Good luck! ^^

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

LMAO---and steadily ignoring the fact that it is now after midnight... next fic. next fic... must find next fic.....

[branchandroot]

They're such evil boys, aren't they? *pets them*

Quarrelsome two

[red-planet31.livejournal.com]

Sigh... Whenever Atobe and Fuji get together... Love the last line. Hehe. How very Fuji.

Re: Quarrelsome two

[branchandroot]

Glad you liked it! Fuji and Atobe are always fun to write, growling at each other. ^_^