YnM: Sky Diving: Polarization - Part Two

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Polarization: Part Two

Watari finally succeeds in becoming a woman, and Tatsumi finally finds out why he wanted to so badly. And why Enma is so upset about it. Drama with Romance and Porn, I-4

• Note: Part Two involves explicit het sex between Tatsumi and Watari; if this is not your cup of tea, you can read parts One and Three and still get most of the plot.

Watari--and he rather liked Yuma's suggestion of Yutako, it was cute--was charmed by how courtly Tatsumi was suddenly being.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Oh, my. Tatsumi really is rather courtly? *dotes on him*

And Watari, so analytical, even in bed. *dotes some more*

[branchandroot]

Tatsumi is so formal so often, I can't help thinking he'd be the courtly type in bed. *grins*

And wow, this was a pain to write from Watari's pov! He keeps /interrupting/. *laughing*

[giving-ground.livejournal.com]

Ooh, Tatsumi/Watari! It's been a while. *g*

I really love your Watari, I have to say. :)

[branchandroot]

*hearts* Thank you! Watari was fun to write; he really is scatterbrained in a genius sort of way, but he's not a ditz, and balancing the massive multi-tasking against equally massive focus was kind of cool to work with.

[blacksarah.livejournal.com]

Kudos to this scene! I am always impressed by writers with a sufficiently expansive vocabulary to not make me either giggle or wince with their choice of terminology during love scenes. Well done!

[branchandroot]

*grins* Thank you! I don't write smut nearly as often as I used to; good to hear I haven't lost my touch. ^_^