Uwah~! All right, so it's been about a couple of months since this was posted, but I figure one more review (even if you never read it) can't hurt, right? Because really, this fic makes me so, so happy. You've entirely nailed the characterisation - Naoji is perfectly understated and so, so - Naoji, perfectly anticipating and complementing Lui and Lui is just so - AURGH. Starkly in character. Everything about him, his twisted Lui-version of not-drinking-tea-sulking and the possessiveness and the pointed kissing. I haven't even finished the series yet but really, I couldn't help but look for slash. And I'm really glad I did, because I can't put into words how squee-worthy this is.

Trust Lui to put everything in the starkest black-or-white terms he could find. Naoji huffed a little, ruefully. Lui was as bad about that as Orphe, really. On a random note? So true, and it made me laugh.