Eyeshield21: Standalone: Negatives

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Negatives

Hiruma considers Mamori. Romantic Introspective, I-3

This was how he put it to himself:

Anezaki Mamori understood the need to fight for what you wanted and cared about.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

*pets Hiruma* I still like this, very much. *pets Mamori, too*

[muura.livejournal.com]

I love it. Simplicity in showing your affections is sometimes more sweet and you don't see that too much in fics. :'3 (And I can imagine Hiruma's expression when he says that last part, heh.)

[bloodywing.livejournal.com]

aww thats really cute *-*

[caffeinic.livejournal.com]

Eeee, so nice. I especially like the ending lines. ♥

[sei-kou-ki.livejournal.com]

S-so cute and wonderful ♥. I love how you included a mention of Hiruma's mystery mother and how different she was from Mamori. Going in my memories~

[themadpuppy.livejournal.com]

*_* I lo-o-o-o-ved it. I first thought it would be a lovey-dovey fic, but once we hit the mother comparison I was hooked. That's great to think about. And the finale is cute:).

[jayniejayne.livejournal.com]

Cute!
And very well-written, too.

[qem_chibati]

I really like the impact this has, it's short but really solidly written and very enjoyable. :D

[cherry-tiger.livejournal.com]

I love this. Everything was just so in character and you gave Hiruma a certain depth that I truly enjoyed. Definitely one of the best HiruMamo fics I've read in a while. ^^ Keep it up!

[demoerin.livejournal.com]

I like that Hiruma's compliments to Mamori are sort of extorted from himself - he has to admit them grudgingly, and after a long period of judgement. I also liked how the speculation about his mother is built up to, since I was wondering why alcohol was mentioned specifically, and then it made perfect sense. And it's nice to see speculation about Mummy Hiruma, as most such theories are focused on his dad (personally I suspect his grandmother's Cruella DeVille, and his mother Miranda from The Devil Wears Prada. No srsly).

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

Oh maaaaaaaaaan, I can't tell you how much GLEE it gives me to read ES21 fic written by you ESP if it's all about Hiruma (and HiruMamo XD)<3