PoT: Standalone: Favors Returned

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Favors Returned

Companion piece to "Games for Fun". Set after the US-Japan Senbatsu matches. Yet more gratuitous sex. Porn Without Plot, I-3, anime continuity

Keigo eyed Sanada's back and smiled with appreciation as Sanada tipped his head back and the spray sleeked down his hair and emphasized the sharp planes of his face.

Comments

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

Well, I have to say that I HATE when Atobe is called Keigo.
Ooh...I know it's his name...and you already explained to me your point and I trully understand but...I can't like either way.
I mean..I can see 'Genichirou' as 'Genichirou' but it's too strange to see Atobe as Keigo, specially in Sanada's voice. And I really think that they wouldn't call themselves for their first names even though they were having sex.

But...put it aside, I like a lot. I confess I liked more the first part. I don't know, for some reason in this situation (I mean, in these two fics) I think Atobe on top is more plausible than the other way. Sanada being on top in this case was soooo strange.
But I liked the development of things either way and I'm happy that you wrote that, because even though I printed the MomoRyo stories, until now I haven't find any courage to read them.

'Keigo'...oh. God! Thanks a lot that you wrote Rikkai Dai fics and not Hyotei, because if I had to read a lot of 'Keigos' I would have gone totally crazy!!! ^_^

[branchandroot]

Good to hear you liked it.