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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2006-08-28 05:55 pm

PoT: Translated: Washed Dry

Fic post from my archive.

Washed Dry

Fuji decides to try his hand against Echizen. It provokes a lot of thought. Drama and Romance, I-3

Shuusuke felt a touch of excitement flicker along his nerves as they moved out into the open, feet scuffing up tiny puffs of dust to mark where they set themselves. Echizen was good. Not good enough to make Shuusuke lose, but perhaps...

[personal profile] fromastudio 2006-09-08 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
I've delayed on commenting on this for a while, partly because of my reactions to the piece. I had a hard time with the relationships, partly because I have this sense of the canon relationships superimposing over my reading. But the Fuji/Yumiko really works for me, despite that reading.

And I love Tezuka being understated and wise. "Even someone who finds his way doesn't always go down it."