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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2005-05-10 12:02 am

PoT: Third Watch: The Rush

Fic post from my archive.

The Rush

Kirihara's second spin through Regionals, and Nationals, as a captain this time. Drama, I-3

The pace of what Akaya couldn't help but think of as the real tournament season had two very different parts. There was the daily practice with his team, which, while demanding and sometimes intense, had a smooth swoop to it. And then there were the actual tournament matches, that sprinted along like a heartbeat after an adrenaline spike.

[identity profile] gameazel.livejournal.com 2005-05-10 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice!

I love how you manage to show totally undiscovered aspects of the characters, while still remaining 100% IC. Also, your language? You're just able to phrase something with such beautiful, succinct language.

*fangirls* ^____^

So, is there anymore to come? Heh.