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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-11-20 06:19 pm
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AS: River: Mercurial

Fic post from my archive.

Mercurial

Mad Hatter has a few difficulties coping with how people have changed, post-canon. Drama With UST, I-3

"You are not fit to carry the weight of Pride," hir lord said, evenly. "You have none. Not really."

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[identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com 2004-11-21 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
[curls up and purrs] Soverysatisfying. ^___^

I will now rescind my previous comments about UST and disgruntlement. For this pair, I'm not sure I can see a way to resolve the sexual tension without breaking one (or both) of them. And I'm rather fond of them being no more broken than they already are.

Isda poked her flour-powdered face over the edge of the stairs.

Having done a tiny bit of digging for names and meanings (no more than a quick Google, mind, so goodness knows how accurate what I've turned up is), this line made me cackle, you sly thing. [snuggles]

"I... have already begun, I think," se answered, softly.

Mmmmm, very important pronoun shift! ^__________^

Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. So very much to love! ^_______________________^

You said there may be more, for Lucifer's point of view? e_e