PoT: Mirror Writing: Puzzle

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Puzzle

The Clue Trout descends upon Ryouma. Drama Finally Romance with Slight Porn, I-3

"You should have someone you can actually trust, every now and then, that's all," Momo said. His mouth tugged up at one corner. "Someone who can talk, instead of meow."

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[naanima.livejournal.com]

*happy sigh*

The Momo/Ryouma fics make me happy. The clue trout was finally picked up ^_^ Couldn't stop squeeing when Momo challenged Nanjiroh. What made it better was Nanjiroh being smart enough to realise what was going one. Then again I always got the feeling that Nanjiroh have always been smart about things, even outside of tennis.

But anyways, back to the Momo/Ryouma squee. They are so cute, Momo's comment about trusting someone beside Karupin made me giggle, and the normal-ness of everything even after they got together is just perfect.

And of course Inui, and Fuji. There are no words to express them, except I found it so heartwarming in a very EBIL way ^^ LOVE!

(and Ryouma's team is ahoot *laughs* Oh, the evil.)

[anruik]

Love how Momo challenged Nanjiroh. Love when the clue trout swats at Ryouma over and over again until he figures it out. Loved it even more when the tennis club thought Ryouma's being swatted by said clue trout was him plotting some evil workout for the,.

But my favorite? Inui noticing and taking notes on it. XD

woo hoo!

[issen4.livejournal.com]

Yes, Ryouma finally gets the clue!

I love how nicely he assimilates the idea, and implements the necessary declaration. And Inui and Fuji's reactions are fun.

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

*squees* Oh, it's pulling itself together so nicely! *.* I'm greedy for more. And the kiss...was hot. *__*

"Sagara, Tsunan..." --> HAHAHA. Look what I spotted. AND DOUBLES ONE *sneeeeeerrrku*

Ah...And I love Nanjirou here. <3

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

*SQUEEEES*

♥ ♥ ♥ LOVE!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

Okay, let me just take a moment to howl here--- An...and Sakuno! Oh, poor, poor Kamio! ^__^
And the fact that Ryoma would use another gay couple to base is *normal* standard upon? {giggles}

And then, oh, the *love* for Inui and Fuji! (and Tezuka, too---*hello* captain!) ♥ ♥ ♥

OH, gods, it's Wednesday... thank goodness! *someone* keep me focused and in front of the tv at 6pm, huh? That's only, what? another four and a half hours away?

Gods, I love this fandom, and you're one of the wonderful reasons why.... ^___^ Your characterizations make me fall in love all over agian!

Much love showered upon you with offers of some of the Mother See's chocolate I brought back with me from California, kay? Unless you want something else....

[ladycrysiana.livejournal.com]

*hearts you* Oh, and the FujiandInui torture...it's so wonderful. I'd comment more, but I'm rather incoherent.

[arashi-neko.livejournal.com]

*convulses in chair, clutching stomach*
Oh... my..... god.... Ryoma's reaction..... And finally getting a clue, a good clue...

Oh, Fuji and Inui are Teh EBIL plotting pair in PoT. The reaction of Ryoma's senpais, though.. wonder how long he was oblivious? Must have been blindingly noticeable to everyone else who knew them well enough.

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

SQUEE! Protective-Momo! Clue Trout! Fuji and Inui evil! Momo vs Nanjirou! SQUEE!

And even smut! [dances for joy]

*Eeeppp!*

[meph-kurama.livejournal.com]

I love Momo...

Just wanted to mention that.

Aside from that I love the way you described Momo's concentration during his match with Ryouma's father. And Ryouma's thought process was very amusing... (especially his team's reaction to him while he was thinking things through!!)

Thank you!

[chzbrgr-of-doom.livejournal.com]

ah, that was priceless.

[absenceofmind.livejournal.com]

i never know what to make of these things, whether the "hey i'm gay and in love with my best friend" thing should be glossed over or angsted over, and having come to no scientific conclusion, i just like smut. so. again, thanks for a fun read. and yay for the clue trout!

[lady-mari-chan.livejournal.com]

Enjoying the story very much, please continue writing.

BTW: What would a clue trout look like anyway? ^_^

[flamesword.livejournal.com]

heeee! Momo playing Nanjiroh! ♥ and Ryoma with a clue! ♥♥ and smut! yummy, yummy, very hot kiss. ♥♥♥ And Fuji being, well, Fuji... ♥♥♥♥♥ I love you. ^_____^