PoT: Mirror Writing: Fence

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Fence

A typical day in the life of Ryouma and Momo, with a few extra revelations on Momo's part. Karupin gets in on the action. Drama With Getting-There Romance, I-4

That furball was the only living creature he had ever seen Ryouma look at with open tenderness, and Momo had a good idea of who would lose if it came to a choice between the cat and himself.

Comments

[branchandroot]

*reads* Ooo. *toothy grin* Fantastic job with those two. Quite IC, I thought. It really captures the edge of competitiveness between Ryouma and Tezuka, and also between Ryouma and Fuji. And I love how ambiguous it's left, at the end, whether Fuji is still fooling himself--whether Ryouma will help him fool himself, or demand that Fuji see him. *wriggles with glee* I definitely like the results!

[flamesword.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked...it was odd and it came out of nowhere, but I like it a lot. I did try to keep it IC, and think I did, but it's an unusual portrayal for them as far as the fandom goes, so I was worried that people would think it was OOC. ^^; And *squeee!* you noticed. *beams* The competitiveness was a very important part of it, I think--it's one of the main things that I think makes it work. ^_^ As for the ambiguity, yeah...part of that is simply because it's still unfinished, and I could leave it there--I like it as an open ending; but Ryoma-muse insists that there be smut, so we shall see. Fuji is, I think, in for a few surprises. *glee* Thank you for the kind comments...it means a lot, coming from you! ^_^