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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-08-19 09:05 pm

PoT: Mirror Writing: Fence

Fic post from my archive.

Fence

A typical day in the life of Ryouma and Momo, with a few extra revelations on Momo's part. Karupin gets in on the action. Drama With Getting-There Romance, I-4

That furball was the only living creature he had ever seen Ryouma look at with open tenderness, and Momo had a good idea of who would lose if it came to a choice between the cat and himself.

[identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com 2004-08-20 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
Karupin is GAWD. Furry cuteness and evil right hook. LOVE!

You know all I can think about is how normal Momo's family life is in comparison to Ryouma's family. And realising that yeah I pretty much would act like Momo too if I found out my crush friend have been brought up the way Ryouma has been.

But the other thing, the other thing being that yes, Tezuka is the substitute father-figure, but you know, in many ways he is -doing- what Nanjiroh had been doing up till Ryouma entered Seigaku. He's teaching Ryouma to deal, to evolve, to have a higher target than Nanjiroh. Except more straight-forward.

And then I remember your last piece, and how Ryouma have figured out that the old man had sent to him to Seigaku for the sole purpose of bettering Ryouma. And, and.... and I don't know what I'm trying to say except that, that.... I don't know.

Love this piece. *wanders off trying to think straight*