PoT: Mirror Writing: Simple

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Simple

A little Momoshiro introspective about how he manages to be friends with Ryouma. Drama, I-3

Despite his startlement, Momo could hold back a delighted grin. Lately, Ryouma had been descending to physical retaliation, in their teasing; it was almost as good as having another little brother.

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[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

[hefts Clue Trout]

[beats Momo with the Clue Trout]

You almost *had* it, you silly boy! [thwapthwapthwap]

Ann: Maybe he did have it, but didn't feel the need to emote about it?

...

[quietly puts the Clue Trout away]

Ahem. [burbles over the fic] SQUEE!

[ladycrysiana.livejournal.com]

...I'm probably the only person who thinks it would be amusing to see what sort of chaos would be loosed if Ryoma adopted Yuuta as an older brother. I continue to love you, &etc.

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

*drawls* Weeeeellll...I'll be damned. I haven't read a good Seigaku fic in so long! You are precious, Em. ♥

I agree with Lysapadin. Momo needs a-beatin' with the Clue Trout[tm].

[naanima.livejournal.com]

Clue Trout? Don't be silly. The stumbling over signs is half the fun ^__^ And they are soooooo kyuuuuute this way ^__^

You know, for some reason Ryouma came across as a cat in a major way. I think it is the whole skittering way from a poke even when a second ago they are happily purring under your hands. You would never hurt the cat, but they are so wound up. Silly cat.

[flamesword.livejournal.com]

*squeeeee!* I have nothing useful to add, except, *squeeeee!* ♥♥♥ You are SO going on my list of favorite authors. ^_^

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

Sweet. I like how Kachirou is developing a background importance - he's who I have pegged to be Ryoma's vice captain.

Your Momo/Ryoma is still charming. I think that's the best description of it.