PoT: Challenge: Dislocated

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Dislocated

Immediately after "The Continuation of War", Yanagi and Inui finally get around to talking about how they parted. Drama With Romance, I-4

He had read descriptions of how it felt to have a dislocated joint realigned, and, from what he recalled, it sounded remarkably like what he had felt this afternoon: a sharp pain accompanied by a hard wrench and a sudden feeling of rightness.

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[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

You know... sometimes it really annoys my inner hentai when you gloss over the hot smexing scenes... but surprisingly enough, the rest of me quickly shoves a plug in the hentai's mouth and sighs with all these wishy washy feel-good feelings.

And then you have the part of my brain that's saying, 'this is *wrong*!!! Renji's in a *relationship*--with two other boys, granted, but it's still a relationship, and this is like *cheating*!' To which my mind replies, "Yeah, sure Renji's in a relationship. With Sanada and Yukimura. And in case you failed to notice, Yuki-babe's the one calling the shots, and *he's* the one who sent Renji *to* Inui, no doubt knowing the two of them would probably end up sleeping together."

And *then* there's this *other* part that's just squealing, "The fluff! Oh, gods! How *cute* And--and--and--!!!"

And then there's the Hentai, who pops out the plug long enough to wonder aloud, "I wonder who Renji's used to topping?"--causing every other portion of me to sweatdrop before running off in multiple directions.... ['well, there's kaidoh, of course' 'oh! Kaidoh and Inui are so *cute* together!' 'And don't forget, both Fuji and Eiji are technically free now that Tezuka and Oishi are together...' 'Well, that could just mean that Fuji and Eiji are together--you *know* that's the second most popular pairing for the two of them, which is why you wanted to write that one fic, remember?' 'Don't forget about Momo and Taka-san! They're still alive, too, you know!' 'oh, hey, it could always be someone from another team...' 'yeah! yeah! Remeber in the other story it's Atobe/Tezuka and Fuji/Tachibanana' 'I'm going to kill Bunny for putting that nickname in my head... Tachibanana, indeed!']

And the insanity keeps swirling around inside my head until it hurts and all I can think of is--- "I need to follow Muscatlove's idea and just make a cute-and-paste reply to your fics that read: I loved it; it was great; write more, please."

^.^;; Okay, that's enough kissing up for now.

[branchandroot]

Hey, I had a hard enough time getting this much smut out of those two. Inui is fantastically shy. *sighs* It was a nice change to write concentrated fluff, though.

*laughs* Ah, but remember, the TezuOishi took place in a quantum bubble; I'm holding my options open.

*stretches* Right, then! On to the YukiKiri.

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

Oh, please! Don't break Tezuka/Oishi, please!! And it would be so interesting to see Fuji with Eiji...

Oh, yeah!!! YukiKiri, finally!!! (but I still want that Sanada/Yanagi fic).

[branchandroot]

*nods* The Sanada/Yanagi bunny is in the queue. *eyes thronging bunnies* Er, in the scrum, at any rate... ^_^;

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

{laughs} Inui's shy? really?

a.... quantum bubble .... you're killing me here... that, or setting me up for one major headache. I just know it... >.<

{blinks} Yuki kiri? YES!!!!

[branchandroot]

Okay, that's enough kissing up for now

Just took a swing throug the f_h thread for morbid curiosity. *kicks stupid people in the backside* 'No personal attacks', yeah, right! *hugs*

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

hn. {accepts hugs} ~__~ attacks on my writing style I can take a lot better than I used to (amazing how college english professors can do that for you... )

people saying mean stuff about *me*, well... I've never been really good at handling that properly...