PoT: Challenge: Dislocated

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Dislocated

Immediately after "The Continuation of War", Yanagi and Inui finally get around to talking about how they parted. Drama With Romance, I-4

He had read descriptions of how it felt to have a dislocated joint realigned, and, from what he recalled, it sounded remarkably like what he had felt this afternoon: a sharp pain accompanied by a hard wrench and a sudden feeling of rightness.

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[sailorstarsun.livejournal.com]

*wibble*

=3

There is much love.

I've been dying to read fic on this pairing. .^_^ That so hit the spot. Great job!

<3

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

It sounds odd to say this, but this fic feels almost as much like a fic about the Triumvirate as it does a fic about Inui and Yanagi.

Maybe that's just my sickness-addled brain talking, though.

Oh, the cute. I love the cute. There needs to be more cute.

And was it just me, or was there an implication that Inui is quite familiar with topping other people...?

[muscatlove.livejournal.com]

I'm starting to think I should just make up a standard response to reply to all these Challenge stories with that consists of me mostly going: *___* <3<3<3 :D <3<3<3 OMGILOVETHISFIC!!!1!!! to past in every time you write one, but I think you'd get sick of me pretty quickly. ^^

But wah. The images. Inui with a more fleshed-out personality, strong and mischievious and hurt and sexy.. the same for Renji, it's just.. giving them *history* without long exposition about it, you can just *feel* what they once were and are struggling with, and it's.. it makes me happy. ^^

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

Holy crap. You were right and they ARE so fluffy!

True Nerd Love. XD

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

You know... sometimes it really annoys my inner hentai when you gloss over the hot smexing scenes... but surprisingly enough, the rest of me quickly shoves a plug in the hentai's mouth and sighs with all these wishy washy feel-good feelings.

And then you have the part of my brain that's saying, 'this is *wrong*!!! Renji's in a *relationship*--with two other boys, granted, but it's still a relationship, and this is like *cheating*!' To which my mind replies, "Yeah, sure Renji's in a relationship. With Sanada and Yukimura. And in case you failed to notice, Yuki-babe's the one calling the shots, and *he's* the one who sent Renji *to* Inui, no doubt knowing the two of them would probably end up sleeping together."

And *then* there's this *other* part that's just squealing, "The fluff! Oh, gods! How *cute* And--and--and--!!!"

And then there's the Hentai, who pops out the plug long enough to wonder aloud, "I wonder who Renji's used to topping?"--causing every other portion of me to sweatdrop before running off in multiple directions.... ['well, there's kaidoh, of course' 'oh! Kaidoh and Inui are so *cute* together!' 'And don't forget, both Fuji and Eiji are technically free now that Tezuka and Oishi are together...' 'Well, that could just mean that Fuji and Eiji are together--you *know* that's the second most popular pairing for the two of them, which is why you wanted to write that one fic, remember?' 'Don't forget about Momo and Taka-san! They're still alive, too, you know!' 'oh, hey, it could always be someone from another team...' 'yeah! yeah! Remeber in the other story it's Atobe/Tezuka and Fuji/Tachibanana' 'I'm going to kill Bunny for putting that nickname in my head... Tachibanana, indeed!']

And the insanity keeps swirling around inside my head until it hurts and all I can think of is--- "I need to follow Muscatlove's idea and just make a cute-and-paste reply to your fics that read: I loved it; it was great; write more, please."

^.^;; Okay, that's enough kissing up for now.

[naanima.livejournal.com]

You glossed over smut between Yanagi/Inui.

*cries*

Otherwise, I LOVE, I LOVE, I LOVE!!! SQUEEEE! And of course you can't have a story with the two of them without OT3's presence as well as the Penal Tea *giggles*

I can't think of anything more intelligent to say except SQUEEEEE! LOVE YOU! I NEED more Yanagi/Inui!

(migraines are a killer)

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

You put me in the edge again. Because to me, Yanagi/Yukimura/Sanada are the perfection, but...after I've read this fic...OMG! That's so unfair! Because Yanagi and Inui (God, I love Inui)are perfect together too! Now I really don't know what I want to these guys...
(ok, I know. I still want the trio together, but...geeez...it's so good to see some YanagiInui sometimes).

[solaas.livejournal.com]

These two creep me out a bit when I think of them, but in here? In here, I just want to hug them. ^_^

Lovely story!

[kalypartemis.livejournal.com]

Nya~!!!! That was uber cute!!! >w< *Melts into a pile of mushy goo* Fufu, seemed kinda rushed, but I loved it! It's so hard to find YanagiInui/InuiYanagi fics, which is really a shame since I am a absolute dork for the pairing XD Keep up the good work, ne? ^.^

[oscurotrophic.livejournal.com]

Wai wai~ That made me warm-fuzzy like I haven't in a long time. Thank you for the ficcing!