PoT: Challenge: Dislocated

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Dislocated

Immediately after "The Continuation of War", Yanagi and Inui finally get around to talking about how they parted. Drama With Romance, I-4

He had read descriptions of how it felt to have a dislocated joint realigned, and, from what he recalled, it sounded remarkably like what he had felt this afternoon: a sharp pain accompanied by a hard wrench and a sudden feeling of rightness.

Comments

[muscatlove.livejournal.com]

I'm starting to think I should just make up a standard response to reply to all these Challenge stories with that consists of me mostly going: *___* <3<3<3 :D <3<3<3 OMGILOVETHISFIC!!!1!!! to past in every time you write one, but I think you'd get sick of me pretty quickly. ^^

But wah. The images. Inui with a more fleshed-out personality, strong and mischievious and hurt and sexy.. the same for Renji, it's just.. giving them *history* without long exposition about it, you can just *feel* what they once were and are struggling with, and it's.. it makes me happy. ^^

[branchandroot]

*laughing* Thank you!

*quiet glee* That was just what I was trying for. I'm very fond of Inui and his mischievious streak.

I'm happy that you are happy. *nods*