PoT: Challenge: Earth Over Heaven

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Earth Over Heaven

Yukimura is finally convinced that he is fully recovered, and is beyond pleased over it. Drama With Romance and Porn, I-4

Seiichi stepped away, and then spun to face them. "It's all here," he said, and Genichirou's throat closed at the wonder in his voice, "I'm all here, still. Again."

Comments

[solaas.livejournal.com]

Dang, you're good! Now I'm beginning to actually notice Renji, too.

It's hot, but you also keep it actually intimate between the three of them. Your writing completely suspends my disbelief, making it no effort at all to ride along and just enjoy the read. No need to consciously switch on the 'this is FANTASY, dammit' filter. ^_^V

[branchandroot]

*blushing* Thank you. That suspension is one of the things I work hardest at, especially for a situation like these three; it's wonderful to hear that it works out!

*grins* I started paying more and more attention to Renji, too, as the arc went on. He's a subtle character, and it took him a while, but I wound up thoroughly in love with him before I was done. ^_^