PoT: Challenge: Earth Over Heaven

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Earth Over Heaven

Yukimura is finally convinced that he is fully recovered, and is beyond pleased over it. Drama With Romance and Porn, I-4

Seiichi stepped away, and then spun to face them. "It's all here," he said, and Genichirou's throat closed at the wonder in his voice, "I'm all here, still. Again."

Comments

[mllelaurel.livejournal.com]

Wow! That left me with a feeling that can probably be best described as euphoric. The connection between the three of them shines through every line. And other people have probably already said as much, but I absolutely love your Yukimura; the way he is both soft and gentle, and (I'm looking for the right word here, and this probably isn't it) blazing. Somehow, you manage to take contradictory terms, and put them together so that they don't contradict any longer.

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Gah. [reduced to incoherency] So--gah!

[half an hour later--no, really]

Gah!

Bob: Aren't you *done* yet?

One more for good measure. GAH!

Now. ^______________^ The mental image I have of the Rikkai boys as towels is so delightful. ^_____^ And the hang-gliding comment? Priceless. ^________________________________________^

[gingaktb.livejournal.com]

The trio pairing fics have always given me an interest. I want to see how writers portray their interactions with each other, and most people do things differently.

I love how you have made them interact. There is a support that you know exists and it's expressed in so many different ways.

Anyway, straying from the point I was going to make... ^^

It was a wonderful story and nicely joins the other parts in this series you have going. I can't wait to see more!

[lechaco.livejournal.com]

Sememuraaa *______*

the descriptions really set the mood. haha XD though I kinda got lost when Genichirou put his legs on Renji's hips. @_@ I tried picturing it but couldn't tell who was where and...yah --;

Seiichi across the court from him, flashing under the sun, brilliant and sharp as a killing sword

one of my favorite lines. I think it's very true. a sword is elegant, beautiful and yet very, very deadly. perfect analogy for Yukimura.

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

I still love your Yukimura. You make me see how he can maintain Rikkai, and why they miss him so.

He shines. He really does, but I wonder you've decided if this is part of the Mirrorverse or not? Because if its not, to me the only true match for this Yukimura would be Tezuka, who has that same quality of perfection... which I think you're set up for.

I never see trios as stable things. They break down eventually.

The trio is interesting, though the Kirihara fangirl in me wonders how that will work in...

Oh, and I didn't see any spell demon typos!

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

*reads*

.....

*reads agains for good measure* *twice*

*leans back in cushy computer chair*

*cures* Troika smex...I love you...all my dreams have finally come true. *worships*

*rocking back and forth keening*



100 hearts for you! ^_^

Squee~~!

[thrance-86.livejournal.com]

You wrote another! So happy! *gushes*

*reads and reads again* O.o

Lurvvleyy!!!! I LIKE~~~!!!!

Still, no kiri-kitten. A weeddle bit disappointed.

No matter, it was still superb work, as always.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

{would love to jump up and down praising the glories that wrote this... but considering the looks her coworkers are already giving here for her crack-faced GRIN and the fact that her two team teachers just walked in she'll have to settle for:


Damn... this was *goooooood*... wanna read it again...

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

I really don't know what to say. I'm totally speachless.
I confess it's hard to me to imagine a sex scene with three people, but...you made it so well. You know since the beginning I fell in love with those three and this story was just perfect. I'm still worried with Kirihara, but I trust in you that you won't destroy Yanagi/Yukimura/Sanada relationship in order to deep Sanada/Kirihara.
Of course SanaKiri is interesting when we think about the sex, I've already told you about that, and I still think the same way after had read the second sex scene with them, but...for some twisted reason I can imagine Kirihara in bed with Yukimura too. A lot of sex, a lot of respect, some tension, but no deep feelings. (because to me, even imagine the trio cracked give me so much pain)

Well, well, well...let's see how you'll work all this. And...really, this is the first time I've felt totally into a Rikkai Dai story. You are amazing! (and your Yukimura is perfect and...can I say that I would like to see some Sanada/Renji story inside this arc? I don't know why, but they are tormenting my mind).

[naanima.livejournal.com]

*cries in joy*

I have only been waiting for the Power3 fic since you began writing PoT fanfiction. I love you, your talent, and your amazing skills at pulling off a GOOD (hot) threesome. *huggles*

I could feel the feeling of euphoria, of relief through this fic. Yukimura's relief, Sanada's relief, the whole team's happiness at having their captain back. And Kirihara's reaction at getting a full blazing congratulation from Yukimura. I love.

The image of Yukimura moving his legs back and forth when *coughs* involved in certain situations make me giggle. Sanada's comment implying it being his first time made me laugh, as his following comment on Yanagi's habit of being right all the time. I love.

Darling, I adore you to death.

Wow

[red-planet31.livejournal.com]

Beyond happy that you write the Rikkais so lovely. I love how you write Yukimura.

[solaas.livejournal.com]

Dang, you're good! Now I'm beginning to actually notice Renji, too.

It's hot, but you also keep it actually intimate between the three of them. Your writing completely suspends my disbelief, making it no effort at all to ride along and just enjoy the read. No need to consciously switch on the 'this is FANTASY, dammit' filter. ^_^V