PoT: Challenge: Earth Over Heaven

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Earth Over Heaven

Yukimura is finally convinced that he is fully recovered, and is beyond pleased over it. Drama With Romance and Porn, I-4

Seiichi stepped away, and then spun to face them. "It's all here," he said, and Genichirou's throat closed at the wonder in his voice, "I'm all here, still. Again."

Comments

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

I really don't know what to say. I'm totally speachless.
I confess it's hard to me to imagine a sex scene with three people, but...you made it so well. You know since the beginning I fell in love with those three and this story was just perfect. I'm still worried with Kirihara, but I trust in you that you won't destroy Yanagi/Yukimura/Sanada relationship in order to deep Sanada/Kirihara.
Of course SanaKiri is interesting when we think about the sex, I've already told you about that, and I still think the same way after had read the second sex scene with them, but...for some twisted reason I can imagine Kirihara in bed with Yukimura too. A lot of sex, a lot of respect, some tension, but no deep feelings. (because to me, even imagine the trio cracked give me so much pain)

Well, well, well...let's see how you'll work all this. And...really, this is the first time I've felt totally into a Rikkai Dai story. You are amazing! (and your Yukimura is perfect and...can I say that I would like to see some Sanada/Renji story inside this arc? I don't know why, but they are tormenting my mind).

[branchandroot]

*takes a bow* Thank you! Threesomes are hard to write; you really have to let them take it slow, and that can get frustrating. But these three work out really well.

No worries, SanaKiri will not break up the Great Three. Aishuu is tempting me to try TezuYuki, but if I do that I think it will be an alternate future to one where the three keep together. *grins* And I'm really tempted to do some YukiKiri, because Kirihara is so cute when he's crushing on his captain.

Sanada/Yanagi, hm? Yeah, some quality time for them could be nice. I'll see if something suggests itself.

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

No worries, SanaKiri will not break up the Great Three.

You made my day ^_^ (oh, not today, because I read this comment when you wrote, but just today I could write to you...and I'm happy all over again because what you said).

Aishuu is tempting me to try TezuYuki, but if I do that I think it will be an alternate future to one where the three keep together.

Hum..that's a pair I had never thought. I don't know...there are so much interesting options to them with other people. I really don't have a great interest in TezuYuki (specially because I love Tezuka with Oishi).

*grins* And I'm really tempted to do some YukiKiri, because Kirihara is so cute when he's crushing on his captain.

Oh, yeah! I totally agree with you! (specially if you do it inside the current arc you are writing)

Sanada/Yanagi, hm? Yeah, some quality time for them could be nice. I'll see if something suggests itself.

I'll be eagering waiting for your ideas.....and your story...I mean, if we could see Sanada/Kirihara inside this arc, we can see some Sanada/Yanagi inside the same arc, ne?