PoT: Challenge: Earth Over Heaven

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Earth Over Heaven

Yukimura is finally convinced that he is fully recovered, and is beyond pleased over it. Drama With Romance and Porn, I-4

Seiichi stepped away, and then spun to face them. "It's all here," he said, and Genichirou's throat closed at the wonder in his voice, "I'm all here, still. Again."

Comments

[lechaco.livejournal.com]

Sememuraaa *______*

the descriptions really set the mood. haha XD though I kinda got lost when Genichirou put his legs on Renji's hips. @_@ I tried picturing it but couldn't tell who was where and...yah --;

Seiichi across the court from him, flashing under the sun, brilliant and sharp as a killing sword

one of my favorite lines. I think it's very true. a sword is elegant, beautiful and yet very, very deadly. perfect analogy for Yukimura.

[branchandroot]

Yeah, I wondered if that needed a bit more explanation. I'll see what I can do in final revisions. Thanks! ^_^V