PoT: Challenge: Temper

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Temper

Yukimura apologizes to the teams his own injured, and picks up a challenge on the way. Drama, I-3

Seiichi's eyes narrowed. He had come here to render an apology, but he'd be damned before he stood still to be a source of entertainment for Fuji Shuusuke.

Comments

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

I still love you.

Your Yukimura is the best portrayal I've seen. He's strong enough to hold the team together, yet there's a beauty to him which makes him seem.... gentle.

I love where this arc seems to be heading. I really can't praise this enough.

One question, concrit. Do you use a spellcheck?

[branchandroot]

Thank you! ^_^

I think Yanagi put it best, and I have to write it down sometime very soon; he likened Seiichi to a dragon. The image seems to fit very well.

I do use a spellcheck, though I sometimes wonder about the people who programmed it. *pained* Did the spellcheck gremlins strike again?

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

A couple of typos, not really worth fussing about (I hate it when people nitpick), but they should have been caught be the spellcheck.

[branchandroot]

Please, feel free to nitpick if the mood takes you! *glares at program* There are days I think someone at Macromedia was asleep at their desk when this particular part of the package was signed off on. It throws the weirdest curve-balls at me every now and then. And my native spelling skills suck harder than a starving ant-eater, so I'm really very grateful when people point out the things I miss so I can go fix them. ^_^;

[aishuu.livejournal.com]

Okay, I will be nitpicky if I see something. Many people are sensitive, and I'm a professional editor, so... ^^;; I get carried away. ^_^ But I still love your writing.