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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-06-25 04:59 pm

PoT: Challenge: Water Over Fire

Fic post from my archive.

Water Over Fire

Immediately after Chapter Ten, Sanada (and, to a lesser extent, Yanagi) explains himself to Yukimura. Drama With Romance, I-4

"You take too much on your own shoulders so often," Renji sighed. "That was exactly what got you into this situation in the first place."

[identity profile] lady-readwolf.livejournal.com 2004-06-26 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
[pouts] >.< Lj's been acting up something rotten for me... bummer. apparently my first comment was lost, so, suffice to say, I love this---I adore your wonderful characterization of everyone (especially my adored Yukimura-sama!), and although i would have adored some smex, the sheer intensity and emotional draw of the bath (and the cuddle/confession fest out in the living room) was absolutely wonderfully written.

Oh, and I *loved* Renji's "correction. 0%" followed by Sanada's thank you for the update... ^.^v

(are you *sure* you don't have anything up your sleeves for D2???)

I look forward to reading more of whatever your muses will produce!