I know what you mean about the fights. I wanted brief scenes for that, something that would show the main players and their general attitude but not devolve into blow-by-blow, but they do fall in the middle of the much fuller narrative. I can see where that would be a bit jarring.
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Date: 2009-12-14 10:51 pm (UTC)I know what you mean about the fights. I wanted brief scenes for that, something that would show the main players and their general attitude but not devolve into blow-by-blow, but they do fall in the middle of the much fuller narrative. I can see where that would be a bit jarring.