PoT: Mirror Writing: Confluence

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Confluence

Mild chaos and vast snarkiness as many paths cross at a music store. Drama With Romance, I-3

He'd really never thought a simple trip to the music store would be so harrowing.

Comments

[wanderingscribe.livejournal.com]

Damn you. I am oddly reminded of John Cusack and Hi-Fidelity now. Tilted relationships, music, and lots of baiting conversation.

I'm not one for Yummi, but this...oddly fit in with everything. Mizuki's a snake, but a much more stable one than he's usually seen as. Maybe he's not losing his edge, but is being tempered down all the same. By Yuuta, of course.

Momoshiro and Echizen's relationship is quite the cute and fluffy stabilizer to the whole story. They're the simple to Atobe and Tezuka's complex, or Tachibana and Fuji's natural. I can't say much about Yuuta and Mizuki or Shishido and Ohtori, because they barely interact, but I'm sure if they ended up around them more, there'd be parallels between those couples as well.

Gah...I love Ann as well. It's like she's the wise woman behind all the fumbling men. The girl who takes it all with a grain of salt and doesn't mind all the GHEY. (Hmm, my guess is that she's a closet fangirl, in a sense. I really enjoy that she calls Syuusuke "Fuji-nii-san" and Yuuta gets all cranky about it.)

I would end this with a "Damn you, write more!" entreaty, but that wouldn't be at all in the spirit of the fic. So, I'll just state that I enjoyed this, like I enjoyed your other works, and hope to read more soon. Thank you very much for writing such a good fic. ^_^

[greedily saves in memories] Ahem. ^^;

[branchandroot]

*sparkles at you* Thank you so much!

*nods* The relationships definitely each have their own shape and pace; I think that's a lot of what made this particular craziness work.

*grins* I was having a very flute day when I wrote the heavily musical sections. Most of it I just googled. The description of Chris Normal is from life, though. I almost died laughing. It was a great concert.

[wanderingscribe.livejournal.com]

Ah, you're welcome. But now I really want to watch Hi-Fidelity again because of its' parallels with this fic. ^^;

Maybe I might find out some stuff about Chris and his music. He sounds very interesting.