PoT: Mirror Writing: Confluence

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Confluence

Mild chaos and vast snarkiness as many paths cross at a music store. Drama With Romance, I-3

He'd really never thought a simple trip to the music store would be so harrowing.

Comments

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

I'm in love with your stories. This was particularly great! What I liked the most, was the fact that you put my favorite Tenipuri characters in one fic: Atobe, Tezuka, Mizuki and Yuuta. Of course I love all the others too (exception to Momoshiro, who I truly dislike), but these four characters are my favorite, I can't help it.

About the story itself, it was so interesting that I was with my heart in my hand with ...I don't know the word. Affliction? Well, it's something like that...and in the same time I was laughing a lot, because there were some parts that were so funny and well wrote.

Hey, I really have to compliment you about the way you write the sentences...and their dialogs. I'd wish I could think about quotes so perfect as you do, because, really, you portrait all of them very well.

And, let me finishing saying three things:
1) Atobe is wonderful and you do him as great as he really is.
2) Mizuki is great and I love him so much that I can't put it in words. I'm not one of them that love to hate him, or hate to love the guy...I love to love Mizuki for sure.
3) I want to see some smut between Mizuki and Yuuta. Of course I want to see Shishido/Ohtori too, but Mizuki/Yuuta is so much better...

Oh, and the fourth thing: I really hope you don't write a Momoshiro/Ryoma fic so early, because I can't help myself but totally dislike this pair, and I don't want to miss a fic from you. (my personal opinion here).

[branchandroot]

*blushing* Thank you very much.

Putting Atobe, Mizuki and Fuji all in the same place was interesting. They formed this kind of character triangle, and played off each other very well. I think Mizuki and Yuuta may be next in line after the ShishiTori; they're both couples that are pretty forthcoming and don't give me a lot of trouble.