PoT: Mirror Writing: The Winner Is...

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

The Winner Is...

Mizuki and Fuji play head games with each other. Psychological Drama with Edgy Porn, I-5

The slow smile that curved Shuusuke's mouth would have sent any sane person running, very far and very fast. Just as well, probably, that Hajime had never made any strong claims to sanity when he was in pursuit of a goal he wanted.

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[naanima.livejournal.com]

.......

yeah.... that was... damn. This is good. Real good. Mizuki has a self-destructive streak a mile wide, but it is only there because Mizuki must win, and it is really disturbing that he ends with a boyfriend that is also obsessed with Mizuki's object of torment.

The fact that Yuuta accepts, understands, and might, just might approve of what Mizuki has done is well, reall sad. Because no matter how much he loves his brother, there will always be something in the way to stop Fuji and Yuuta from being the brothers they use to be.

Also, I wonder if either of them realises that Fuji just might have let Mizuki win, because Fuji love his brother so much that letting Mizuki win is almost like a blessing for the relationship. Or am I reading too much into this?

Either way, I love this, and I'm highly curious at the fallout on Fuji's side (or why he was angry in the first place).

BTW, love the possessiveness that is so apparent in the three of them, and maybe it's just me, but I didn't find Fuji evil or mean here. I found a Fuji that's strangely nice, and very human.

And NOW the SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! MORE! MORE! Here, have truffles!

[branchandroot]

*clutches at hair* Damn it, woman, you've invaded my head! I was really, really, going to stop here, but, no, Tachibana and Fuji are alread having a chat over a third story, Fuji pov to balance everything out. *sighs and nibbles a truffle*

I'm fairly sure Fuji is aware, by the end, of what the whole interlude was about for Mizuki; while he may not have let Mizuki win, he did let him carry off his victory without interference.

*nods* Very human. Which, I think, may be what Tachibana needs to get through to the ingenious little twink. Fuji plays to his own image a little too much, sometimes.

[naanima.livejournal.com]

MWAHAHA!

See me invade, and dump truckloads of truffles. Beside you can't end it there, not with so much things left unsaid (or shown).

Exactly, carry it off Mizuki, but just realise Fuji LET you win *feel sorry for Fuji*

Yes, the ingenious little twink does play to his own image of 'Sadistic Evil Genius' a bit too much. Someone need to shake him up a bit and make him admit that yes, he's genius and powerful, but he's also human that do get hurt. And Yuuta is an all too sore point for Fuji.

*awaits for more*