FMA epic start

[branchandroot]

Ok, here's the first chapter of the epic that bit me. Linked off site because I'm sick of messing around with code that's scrozzled on one end or the other.

Antagonism is the main warning for this chapter.

http://www.alltrees.org/hybrid/writing/FMA/ever.ch1.html

Back to ch. 2.

Comments

[marmalade-girl.livejournal.com]

This is a very nice start. I'm happy to see Al back in his own body and I'm happy to see Ed at all. (Ed *always* makes this one happy!) I'm anxious for the crushes and the kissing to start, but I gather you're going to make us wait for it, huh?

BTW--I *did* make that screencap my wallpaper, and my darling husband is at his wits end over what to do with his odd wife. I suspect that when I come home from work tomorrow, it'll be changed. Thanks for helping me torment him! ^___^

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[branchandroot]

Oh, it'll be clueless ust right to the end *wicked laugh*.

Always glad to help!