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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2009-04-23 09:51 am

Id-candy safety

Notice: This is a repost of an entry; the first was cruelly devoured in a crossposting glitch and all the lovely comments with it. If anyone wants to comment again or more I will be perfectly pleased to carry on the conversations.

So, here’s the thing. I’m all in favor of having books that are id-candy, brain-fluff, that demand nothing from your intellect and instead go straight on to punch your emoporn joybuttons.

This is, after all, why I own three quarters of everything Mercedes Lackey has ever published.

But, first off, id-candy is a different thing from good writing. The joybuttons don’t care about bad grammar or triteness or slop, they just resonate to the character shapes that hit one’s kinks. Kinks are often trite and cliche, when you think about it. Id-candy is enjoyable exactly because it doesn’t make your brain engage, it doesn’t deal in subtleties, it doesn’t make you do any work. To get enjoyment out of genuinely artful prose, you generally have to think, to ponder even, to put in some work.

Saying that you enjoy your id-candy immensely and saying that your id-candy is great writing are very different statements. Among other things, the first is true and the second generally isn’t. (Unless you’re using a completely Utilitarian definition of “good”, and when people try to compare Rowling and Tolkien it is unfortunately clear that they are not employing such a definition at all.)

There’s absolutely nothing wrong with enjoying the hell out of trite, cliched slop, of course.

Let us consider Misty, for example. She’s the Queen of Exposition, has a tendency to extremely moralistic and preachy narrative, and drives home her morals with a ten pound sledge. She is guilty of the most egregious cultural flattening and caricaturization and the only thing that comforts me even minutely is that she does it to everyone, whitebread, ‘noble savage’ and orientalist alike. (I maintain that Ancient Egypt should take out a restraining order on the woman.) Her characters are flat, their angst is repetitive, and half the time the stories read like SCA handbooks instead of novels.

Nevertheless–three quarters, right there on my shelf, and I reread handfuls of them at fairly regular intervals. This is because they are excellent brain-fluff emoporn.

Also because they are not toxic. Her moralism can get wearing awfully fast, but at least they are morals I can agree with. Mostly.

That’s the second thing. You have to be careful of the id-candy that uses a moral framework that’s harmful to you.

The Twilight books are a prime example of this. The writing is no worse than most id-candy, but the value system those books are hung on is poison. It’s misogynist, racist, deterministic, conflates obsession and stalking with love, and runs the mobius strip of nihilism and femininity myths at full speed with special emphasis on death by/for childbirth. (I would not want to be this woman’s therapist, not without hazard pay). This id-candy has a razor blade in it.

Some people probably bemoan the loss of innocent fun now that we chop up Halloween candy before eating it to make sure there aren’t any evil surprises in it. I expect some people feel the same about their id-candy. But, you know, I’d much rather take the time to chop and evaluate than swallow a needle.

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[identity profile] ranalore.insanejournal.com 2009-04-25 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Recommenting for the historical record, la!

Beautifully articulated, though I maintain Tolkien's a bad example to hold up in this kind of debate, since his status as any kind of good writer continues to be hotly debated. Technical competence is no less a component of "good" writing than compulsive readability, but nor is it any greater a component. I say this as an editor who has regularly rejected pieces that were proficiently written on a technical level, but which did not strike me as likely to engage the reader.

One reason I think this discussion crops up again and again is because you get a lot of people privileging technical competence, and a lot of other people privileging the Id factor, and thus they're not even speaking the same language when they use the term "good." This is unsurprising, since the term carries an inherent weight of subjectivity, and I'm not sure how useful it is to attempt to remove that weight. I think it's better to push for everyone to openly acknowledge it, and to articulate what measurement they're using.

[identity profile] ferdelance.insanejournal.com 2009-04-26 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
This is, after all, why I own three quarters of everything Mercedes Lackey has ever published.

Hahahaha, you beat me to exactly what I was going to confess! (Though really it's more like "one-third of everything" at this point; I pruned them something fierce last time I moved.)

This id-candy has a razor blade in it.

Yeah. This is what I seriously don't "get" about Twilight fans; it makes me uneasy around them because, if they're not seeing/feeling that razor blade... it means their insides are made of the same stuff. And the idea that I know/meet that many people with seriously skewed values is... disturbing.

(Anonymous) 2009-04-26 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Here via [insanejournal.com profile] verilyverity (verilyverity, in case the coding doesn't work)'s LJ. I really like the idea you've shared and especially the extension of the metaphor (the razor in the candy).

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[personal profile] gnatkip 2009-05-08 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I... have no idea how I got here! From IJ, I guess? I've had this bookmarked for days so I could remember to tell you that I like it a lot, and especially your paragraph about Twilight. That's the most precise description of that series I think I've ever seen.