PoT: Hearts and Spades: Steel and Cypress

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Steel and Cypress

After watching the National semifinals, Mizuki wrestles with his ambitions and fears--at least until Yuuta gives him a push. Drama with Romance, I-4

Hajime's mouth quirked. What a spot to put himself in, a sensible, logical person agreeing to go forward alongside this firebrand and push both of them to the edge and beyond.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

*positively bouncing* Oh, Mizuki, don't you want to know why Yuuta's already looking triumphant?

*sparkles* Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

[uminohikari.livejournal.com]

I delurk!
And bow at the amazingness of this fic!

And
"When he opened his eyes again Yuuta was smiling, brilliant and... somehow already triumphant. "
made me laugh, and made people stare at me oddly.

Yay for oblivious!Mizuki

[crowitched.livejournal.com]

The Mizuki/Fuji rivalry thing going on is so much fun to explore isn't it?

oh god your Yummi is so adorable, bright and dgkjdshfasdl just totally going on.

[epigrammist.livejournal.com]

"He would be damned before he'd be less than Fuji Shuusuke."
--That line is made of SO MUCH WIN. I love the whole Mizuki/Fuji thing going on in this series (as I've said before, but I just have to say it again), even though they aren't even interacting in person. ♥

Your characterization makes me so happy. ^___^ This is a ridiculously good fic!

[pedotastic.livejournal.com]

I. I. Oh. Oh my.

"All because he wanted Yuuta to look only at him, the way he was right now."

That? That floored me. And it wasn't just the fact that Mizuki is FINALLY BEGINNING to admit a bit of his feelings, but because the only at him was so beyond adorable and sweet and tooth rotting and and and now I'm incoherent.

:|

Basically, Mizuki has such a spot it my heart that your Yummi fics make me wibble and sigh and want to RP and/or write fic right now. It makes the Mizuki in my head all wiggly and alive. It's rather unfortunate, at times, actually. XD;

BUT UH YEAH. I LIKED THIS PART... A LOT. BECAUSE I LOVE MIZUKI AND HIS WARPED MIND. He needs to get a reality check, rofl. ♥ Keep up the amazing work. *____*