PoT: Translated: Immanent

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Immanent

A new, young samurai arrives at the central castle of the Uesugi clan. Drama, I-3

Echizen Ryouma had been in Kasugayama for a week, and one of Uesugi's warriors for three and a half days, before he ran into trouble.

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[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

*insert excited squeaking here*

*and bouncing, too*

Fun fun fun! *dances*

"You! What was that? Are you disrespecting your betters?"

Ryouma straightened in turn and eyed the loud-mouth coolly. "No."


My favorite part, definitely. *grin*

purple!

[kenllama.livejournal.com]

ooh! i love the purple layout on your fic journal. sweet and luscious =)

*hugs*
k

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

oh! oh! oh!

dammit--why isn't there more of this already? do you realize I'm stuck at my desk for the whole day with hardly *anything* to do??? and it's only 9:30!!! [cries]


Actually... I have to admitt, secretly, I didn't expect to like this very much. I generally don't appreciate AU's or many rewritings, and I get overly annoyed with myself when something I write that isn't meant to be seems terribly out of place with the original story line.....

But damn if I wasn't swallowing several squeals, grinning like an idiot, and half-jumping out of my seat..... in the teachers' room.


I think I might hate you. >.>

[meitachi.livejournal.com]

Oh Ryoma and his snarky ways. Just one word will do it. ♥♥ Eee, I can't wait for more! :D Think of all the characters you've yet to tackle, mm.

[hazuki-katako.livejournal.com]

Kya-------~! Thank you for advertising this in tenipuri! :3
I've always wanted someone to write an AU like this! Thank you for making one of my fandom dreams come true! ^_^
I love Sengoku Jidai...

Akutsu kicking down teahouses...it sounds like he'd be under Data Masamune...
I can see Hiyoshi under Oda Nobunaga...(well, in the Gakuensai game he played Akechi Mitsuhide after all...gekokujou)

[wolfsbane68.livejournal.com]

Niiice ;-D The way everyone treats the matches in PoT (andd all the other shounen sports series) as if they had someone's life riding on them gets a bit irritating at times. The attitude suits much better in this AU. Really lookinh forward to the next installment XD

[forochel.livejournal.com]

I SQUEE AT YOU. It does seem so much more fitting. They all seem a lot more natural here...yay! Oh look, it's Rurouni Kenshin only earlier and with the Tenipuri characters! Wheeee~ I expect there will be Much Violence and Blood and Action? :DDD

And gosh, the rewrite of that first meeting and the whole thing... squeeeeee~ Ryooomaaaa~ You clever little brat. Only not so little anymore, since you're twenty and things. ♥

*bounces around hyperactively*

[femme-cat.livejournal.com]

I can't believe I'm only just discovering this now. Love, love, love the thought of samurai!Tenipuri boys. X3

*goes to read the rest*

[fromastudio]

The voice. I think that's what I like best about this piece - the voice is so quintessentially Echizen. It has his nonchalance and that hint of cockiness. It sounds a tad older than his canon personality, which is perfect considering that he /is/ older in this context. I love that line about how the trouble started - not for Ryouma, not yet.