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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-03-11 07:14 pm

FMA: Circumstances: Sustained

Fic post from my archive.

Sustained

When it comes down to action everyone has to find a way to handle the stress. Plot With Porn, I-4.

"If you die doing this, the way you think you're going to," Ed growled, lifting Roy's chin until they were eye to eye, "I swear I'll bind your soul to your damn desk, and you'll spend the rest of eternity buried in paperwork."

[identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com 2004-03-12 08:48 am (UTC)(link)
Damn woman, that was hot, and so perfect. For something that began as a random humour/sex series you've made it into plot, and more plot, and so much character exploration.

The dynamics between Roy and Ed is perfect. Roy is distant when things begins to get serious, and you can just see him being the type to send away the ones he truly love from harm's path. Overprotection much. But then, it his way of dealing. However, Ed's temper will see through all, and when you add him truly caring/loving Roy, well the Flame Alchemist really never had a chance.

Adores Ed's oath about binding Roy's soul to the desk. It's something that Ed would o. Threats, and true love. You've ot adore the boy.

Something I probably didn't mention earlier but should've is that I love the fact you don't put the two of them in a strict seme/uke role. What you depict of their sexual relationship is more real. Sure, everyone have a preference for their sexual position but like eveything there are variation. Somedays you just wanna fuck, and others days you just want to be fucked.

And after much gushing, some more gushing. I love you and worship the ground you walk on.

[identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com 2004-03-12 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes. Variety.

All those different positions one can try out with ones' partner.

I have this sneaky suspiscion that Roy have a little book of sexual experimentation, and the man is ticking off things as he and Ed make their way through the list ^__^

*grins back*