PoT: Mirror Writing: Delta

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Delta

Atobe is rather tired of Tezuka brooding, and decides it's time for another conversation with Fuji to see if the problem is amenable to a swift kick. Romantic Drama With Occasional Porn, I-4

He couldn't believe Fuji had misread Kunimitsu that badly. No, wait, he could believe it; after all, it wasn't as though he hadn't known plenty of intelligent, talented individuals who where, nevertheless, gifted with the people skills of dried seaweed. It was just that he expected this kind of thing from Ryou, not from Fuji.

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[anruik]

*loves~!* And that's one helluva nice way to say "thank you" without verbally saying it. XD Its always fun to watch Atobe do what needs to be done to get what he wants later on. *showers with truffles*

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~!

My love for Atobe is deep and abiding. [purrrrrrs]

Best Atobe-inna-relationship sum-up ever: Keigo was perfectly willing to allow that Kunimitsu had a right to be concerned for his friends. But thinking about other people to the exclusion of Keigo himself, when Kunimitsu was with Keigo, was not something he intended to tolerate.

And Inui being hesitant to try one of his own concoctions... mweheheheheheheheh!

And "Fuji said, with the mildness of a green and pleasant mountain just before it explodes and rains burning rock all over the landscape." put me into hysterics, and I had to take a good five minutes to calm down. ^____________________^

And yayyyyyy Kabaji-the-poet! If for no other reason than I love the thought of how flabbergasted that would make everyone else in the tenipuri cast.

And finally! Goosh! Smoosh! Purr!

I think I may need to take another break to calm my spastic self down.

[snuggles] Lovely work, as always.

[chinawolf.livejournal.com]

*has trouble breathing*

Wow that was hot. Love this universe and was hoping you'd continue writing in it, but this was more exquisite than anything I anticipated. A very good mixture of awesome character interaction (as usual), all very much IC imho, and very tasty smutty bits. Thank you. *bows deeply*

[naanima.livejournal.com]

..meh....guh....WAHHHHHH! LOVE *glomp*

Tezuka and his moping. I can picture the slight frown, Atobe and his insistence on being noticed, Fuji and his people skills (or lack of), and INUI and his hasty reason for not being the control *giggles* I love! But what I love most is Fuji's reaction to Kabaji's poetry reading *giggles* I LOVE!!

[issen4.livejournal.com]

after all, it wasn't as though he hadn't known plenty of intelligent, talented individuals gifted with the people skills of dried seaweed.

So true.

I love this one, and especially Atobe. It's fun to see him exert himself for once... twice.

[ladycrysiana.livejournal.com]

Ow. You've given me the mental image of Atobe as a relationships counselor, and as much as I love the boy, ow. But yes, loved the fic, very definitely so.

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

oh, you are so cleverly, talently cruel. ^____^ This was love on top of love on top of, well, they kind of slid off the couch, didn't they?

Still... Keigo's insistence on not being ignored.... Inui and Fuji... Fuji.... Kabaji and Poetry Readings. the idea that Keigo might actually have been close enough to Kabaji to miss his presence enough to go to the boy's poetry readings.... and Tezuka's thank you? Whew! [fans self] boy don't I wish I wasn't at work right now....

[rasinah.livejournal.com]

*hyperventilates* Uwaaa, shteamy shtuff!!!
Love this. I also love the Atobe in here; proves he's more than a narcissistic diva. And seme!Tezuka is a joy indeed.

*fans self* Uwaaa, still can't get over the shteamy heat!

[sherryillk.livejournal.com]

So good, so good, so good! That was a great AtoZuka fic!!! YUMMY!!! And you made Fuji with Mizuki...! *hearts* I love you.

[mica-chan.livejournal.com]

I'm so happy!!! I was missing your fics sooo much (because...you know I'm no so into your last pairs). Even though I'm not sooo attached to Tezuka/Atobe, I like them together (specially in Mirror Writing Arc).
The way Atobe acted...his talk with Fuji...(and made me remember the part when you wrote about Mizuki and Fuji....and it was good to remember ^_^), Tezuka's answer in the end....everything was perfect.
And I can say again: I'm so happy!!!!!

[love]

One word: Mmmthisficwasniceandilikedyouratobeandkabajiwasfunnyandyay!

[sailorstarsun.livejournal.com]

::shudders:: Ooooooooh....lovely.... ::grin::

[beckymarie.livejournal.com]

I... wow, there's really so much I want to say and I don't know if I can, because I'm too much in that floaty, blissful, sated stage. So many good things about this story--the spot-on characterization that made me sparkle like mad, the gorgeous dynamic between Tezuka and Atobe, the fabulous interaction between Fuji and Atobe where neither of them really gave any ground (because they wouldn't), but still managed to get somewhere anyway, the beautiful, beautiful smut... all of it lovely and wonderful and just... leading up to that sense where I sort of float around the room for awhile until I'm ready to come down. ....which seems like it'll be for awhile longer yet as this is the second time I've read through the fic and I still get that feeling. *floats~*

[kateriya.livejournal.com]

*incoherently happy* this is exactly the kind of character interaction that i love about this couple, allowing each other to see their inner selves yet still holding on to the pride that is so much a part of them.

there's really too little of Tezuka/Atobe/Tezuka fiction that can grasp such characterization. can i, y'know, worship you or something? cookies? chocolate? pocky?

Lovely TezuAto

[red-planet31.livejournal.com]

I just love Tezuka and Atobe together. They're meant for each other!!! Hehe. Love this fic!!!

Love this!!!

[red-planet31.livejournal.com]

I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE TEZUATO!!! You are definitely one of my favourite authors!!! TezuAto FOREVER!!!