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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote 2004-08-15 06:21 pm (UTC)

*nods, thoughtfully* An explainer graph I could probably do. Akutsu would make a reasonable point of comparison from Momo's viewpoint. Any clarification I can give without descending into exposition is a good thing. And contrasting Matsueda to Akutsu, a bit, could help flesh Matsueda out some more, which I do want to do. And help emphasize the development of Momo's analytical eye, which would be good too. *claps hands* Good, that'll all work! *scribbles revision notes*

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