Hum....I think it was a little too slow. I love Yukimura, but sometimes he is too gentle to my personal taste.
Of course I liked this fic, specially because I was waiting for some intercourse between Yukimura and Kirihara for a long time, but...I don't know. "I" prefer something more rough, more violent. The problem is that it's almost impossible with Yukimura, because he's damn manipulative (oh, yeah, I think 'god' was a good description to him), but extremely calm and have a self control out of the ordinary.

But what really matter is that you wrote this piece and I enjoyed as always ^_^