PoT: Challenge: The Continuation of War

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

The Continuation of War

A small snafu leads to some practice time between Rikkai and Seigaku, just before the end of Nationals. Drama, I-3

Momo cast his erstwhile opponent a thoughtful glance. "You know, Marui-san," he said, slowly, "all of you are acting really different, today."

Marui cocked an eyebrow at him. "Of course we are," he responded, easily, "Yukimura's back."

Comments

[branchandroot]

Where's Jackal???

*wails pitifully* I couldn't fit him in this one!

I am, indeed, waffling severely over how to show what's happening with the Seigaku boys. I don't want to give up the Rikkai pov, but if I want to explore Fuji's development any further I'm going to have to go outside what they're likely to witness. A sidestory, maybe.

Yes! You should get on with your own Rikkai Doubles fic! *grins*

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

*looks* there's *always* room for jackal!

A side story is an idea... or, is Fuji going to be involved with a variety of Rikkaidai or just certain select individuals? You could try a story from bi-polar PoV? A scene from Rikkai's view, a scene from Fuji's... ??

And I *am* writing this darn fic... It's just proving to be a little tricky 'cause, uh, there are like, five or nine other stories on my desktop clamoring for attention, too >.< I swear... they're multiplying when I'm not looking...