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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-07-02 01:18 am

PoT: Challenge: Need

Fic post from my archive.

Need

Fuji visits Rikkai, hoping Yukimura can explicate a few things for him. Drama, I-3

"Fuji," Seiichi sighed, running a hand through his hair. Still, he had been trying to wake Fuji up for years, now. Something he suspected Fuji had recalled, too.

[identity profile] aishuu.livejournal.com 2004-07-03 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Definitely more. Nothing makes Fuji LESS dangerous.

I always thought that Sanada was actually more likely to be a better player than Yukimura - Yukimura was just more of a leader, but your portrayal of Yukimura has me reconsidering. Like Hyotei, the leader of Rikkai would have to be the best. *g* And if they call Sanada the Emperor, what does that make Yukimura? Kami-sama?

It's kinda sad when you think of it. The two best players on the circuit out of it... because face it. Tezuka is the best, because he's Konomi's favorite. We all know it. The only reason Atobe won was so Konomi could gracefully send him away.... (ever see [livejournal.com profile] mildlyinsane's rant on the Marysueness of Ryoma, Tezuka and Atobe? It's to DIE for....)

[identity profile] aishuu.livejournal.com 2004-07-04 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
You have to see it. It's to DIE for.

The captains philosophy does fail in Yamabuki and I think also Rokkaku - but those schools are a bit weird. Then again, all schools are a bit weird. I think the most normal school is Seigaku... it's the standard which other schools are spun off of.

Dare you to have someone call Yukimura Kami-sama. It fits so well into your universe. *giggles*

I'm not sure what to expect of nationals, since we're obviously going to be getting some new schools from other regions. I have the feeling we're a few YEARS from seeing the end of the manga. It's going to be anticlimatic when Seigaku wins, because Rikkai should have won there...

*shrugs* Well, I'm still not sure who won the Ryoma/Sanada match. The last I knew, it was still going on.

[identity profile] risingtides.livejournal.com 2004-07-05 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, it's one of the Jimmies. I figured it could be explained by him being in doubles, but Sengoku is the team's ace.

Of course, he's irresponsible as HELL, but...

Can't wait to see what you cook up. Ryoma and NIOU is a frightening pair. Now I'm really intrigued.

*hearts hearts*

[identity profile] naanima.livejournal.com 2004-07-04 10:39 am (UTC)(link)
he's never known what it meant to strive for his goals. And he never risked going far enough to see if someone could make him, in tennis.

Ditto. I'm sure we've had this conversation before, though I might have had imagined the whole thing. Fuji is brilliant, but it is tragic because of the reasons you've pointed out. Having painted Fuji as the most powerful player in PoT, the question is whether Konomi will continue to allow Fuji to be the Most Powerful. Because PoT is all about the evolution of character's tennis, and perhasps Fuji has come to the end of his evolution. (I relaly don't see anything else beyond blind tennis, but this is shounen sports...so -_-;;;).

Anyways, moving onto the fic. The way you made Yukimura the one to act as the catalyst. Perfect. Fuji need someone he can respects to tell him what is going on, and preferbly someone who is not close to him.

I love this fic. I really love this fic. I love the premise, I love the discussion (because it's so true, Tezuka would make Fuji play all out now that he knows Fuji had played seriously), and I love the fact that Fuji beat Yukimura.

LOVE!MORE!
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[identity profile] written-in-blue.livejournal.com 2004-07-05 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
I do wonder what Konomi will do about Fuji.

He could always injure him. That would solve the problem quite neatly.

[wanders off]