PoT: Challenge: Contrary

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Contrary

Kirihara decides to tease Sanada, and the results are about what one might expect. Porn Without Plot, I-4

"Do you remember what I said about teasing, Akaya?" he asked, softly.

Pressed against the length of Sanada-san's body, so tightly he could feel as well as hear the deep, smooth voice, Akaya couldn't hold back a triumphant grin.

"That it works?" he suggested, breathless.

Comments

[written-in-blue.livejournal.com]

Wheeeesmut! [dances]

"Do you remember what I said about teasing, Akaya?" he asked, softly.

...

"That it works?" he suggested, breathless.

[laughs till she cries]

[issen4.livejournal.com]

Just drifted by... saw PoT fic. Stayed.

I really like your style of writing, and this is not just sexy, it's amusing too. Thanks for writing this!

[soloproject.livejournal.com]

Porn without plot from you is really YAY! Hahaha, there is a plot. Kinda. Ok, there none. Like lysapadin sez it's wheesmuuut! (and that's the best line too, I agree!)

Sana-pants, er, less...is scary. And funny too, actually and still a dork. But a LOVABLE dork, mind you. ^__^ And Akaya is *squishes* You're on a really suspicious roll here with the fic, ain't ya? ^_^ i bet you're like...5 stories ahead, haha!

I noticed something...teasing is something your character(ization)s like to do...and YOU LIKE TO DO IT TOO! XDDDDD

[featherypony.livejournal.com]

I said gawddamn! *drools*

You're making me really like this pairing. << My muses are scowling at me.

I love the dynamic between Yanagi, Yukimura and Sanada...loved it in Water Over Fire, and here when they give Akaya tacit...permission, approval, whatever the word is....and Akaya's such a delightful brad. <3

[lady-readwolf.livejournal.com]

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<<<<Akaya realized he was doing this in front of Sanada-san's real partners, and might be stepping on some toes. He let Sanada-san escape in favor of approaching his captain, instead.
"Yukimura-buchou?">>>>

{snickering} yeah... forgot about that, didn't ya... lmao. Oiya! This was down right great! Loved the line about teasing, too ("That it works?")!

so what will you be serving us next? (glutton for good stories)

Eeep!

[thrance-86.livejournal.com]

That was HOT~!!

Loveitloveitloveitloveit!!!

P/S: I'm reading is in the college library. Hopefully, no one noticed the steam coming out of my ears...