PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Ten

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Ten

The team brings the results to their captain. Drama, I-3

"Is it over, do you think?" Yagyuu asked, at last, barely whispering in the silence. He didn't protest when Masaharu twined a hand into his hair, drawing his head down to Masaharu's shoulder.

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[solaas.livejournal.com]

Just found this fic via other people's LJ Memories and whatnot.

It's fantastic. Fan-tas-tic. I'm fairly new to the PoT fandom, and have spent the last couple of months being delighted that the fandom is so large that I manage to find many competent writers and good stories. This one stands out, though. I think it's, if not the best I've read, certainly in the top three.

Living, breathing characterisation, excellent flow, good mix of drama, humour and angst, good sense of time passing, and the way you slipped the sex scene in so naturally... It's very, very rare to see such a thing done in a fanfic.

Also, the wrist band comment? Effing brilliant!

Thank you for writing this! :D

And for keeping your posts unlocked, so's I could read them. ^^

[branchandroot]

*beams* Thank you! It's always good to hear when someone liked these stories.

And I have to admit, this one is my personal favorite of all my PoT stories to date. Not even the rest of the Challenge arc was quite such a... pure experience to write. So there's an extra glow when people like this one. ^_^