PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Ten

[branchandroot]

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Ten

The team brings the results to their captain. Drama, I-3

"Is it over, do you think?" Yagyuu asked, at last, barely whispering in the silence. He didn't protest when Masaharu twined a hand into his hair, drawing his head down to Masaharu's shoulder.

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[featherypony.livejournal.com]

Okay, it's taken me a long time to read this because work and sleep interfere with my time online. So I hope you get this. ^^ But...I love it. Most D1 fics I've read I've really liked...D1 seems to bring out the best writers...but I really, really love this fic. I didn't want it to end. Um...there's a lot more I wanted to say, about characterization and whatnot and such and such, but I don't think I can find the words to express it (especially on so little sleep). I'm bad at that. However, I will say that I loved your portrayal of everyone on the team. *nods* And I am going to go read the other parts of the arc now. *nods*

That said, would you um...mind if I added this journal as a friend? >>

[branchandroot]

*sparkles* Thank you! I'm glad to hear you liked it. *commiserates* Wouldn't life be easier if we didn't have to sleep?

And, please, feel free to friend. Welcome!