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Branch ([personal profile] branchandroot) wrote2004-06-22 09:34 pm

PoT: Standalone: Challenge - Chapter Ten

Fic post from my archive.

Challenge: Chapter Ten

The team brings the results to their captain. Drama, I-3

"Is it over, do you think?" Yagyuu asked, at last, barely whispering in the silence. He didn't protest when Masaharu twined a hand into his hair, drawing his head down to Masaharu's shoulder.

[identity profile] muscatlove.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
*happy sighs* So, so lovely. I have been seriously lazy and didn't comment on parts 4-10 (XD;;;) but I really loved each one. Particularly the sex scenes, and not just because it was sex, but because you had a very refreshing way of writing them that really came together at those moments in particular. However, the entire fic was really just a pleasure to read, and especially nice that all the parts came out so fast. ^^ I am in awe of your talent, and I really look forward to seeing what you write next. (And I second the other requests for more Rikkai.. as a team they haven't had the attention they deserve in fandom yet, for all it feels like everyone is talking about them lately, and you definitely do them justice). ^^